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The white dress slowly dwindles down,
Stealing my light.

Slowly flickering away,
In the endless night.

As the darkness creeps,
Fear cloaks over me.

And with blackness goes my sanity.

My humanity drips away
And I smile my sharpened teeth,
Glinting as the light comes back with a black fire.

Because you've now expired.

Once I remember,
When the fire was lit,

'Twas a ray of hope,
But now it's forgotten.

A broken star in his sea of heaven.
:iconbeabeabeatrice:
Guuuuyyyyss!! This came out amazing!! I absolutely love it!! :claps: Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Each part is divided by the stanza.

1. :iconfullofenergy:

2. :iconammb96:

3. :iconpinktwirlz:

4. :iconmaxwellsmaart:

5. :icondragthelegendarysmn:

6. :iconstories-of-lives:

7. me!

8. :iconmabogunje:

9. :iconayeaye12:
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~MaxwellSmaart Sep 28, 2012  Student Writer
Awesome! My line was italicized; you know me so well! :XD:
This came out fabulously, though! I'd definitely participate again if you decided to do another!
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:iconbeabeabeatrice:
Indeed hee hee XD

And I probably will soon! :D
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~AyeAye12 Sep 28, 2012  Student Writer
Heh, I get the last line :P

Great work, I'd love to do this again :)
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~fullofenergy Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This came out amazing! I kinda feel bad I messed up the beginning but they made it all better!
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:iconbeabeabeatrice:
You serious? Your part was amazing!!
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=pinktwirlz Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hooray everyone!
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